Here is the new ad copy that will appear in the Livingston County News on February 23rd. I modified the ad to take into account as many of your suggestions as I could. (Thanks for the great response to my request for suggestions.) Susan Bailey approved this ad, but the responsibility for it is mine. I hope most members like it, and that very few dislike it.
Remember that this is just the text. The ad will appear with the same color photograph we used last time. Everyone agreed that the photo looked fabulous, and made the ad stand out.